Book Thoughts: A Slow Burn by Mary DeMuth

A Slow Burn by Mary DeMuth is the second book in the Defiance, Texas trilogy. The trilogy tells the story of Daisy Chance’s murder through several POVs: her best friend, Jed (Daisy Chain, the first book), her mother, Emory, and the man who considers himself Emory’s protector, Hixon (A Slow Burn, book two), and Jed’s mother, Ousie (the final book of the trilogy). The third book reveals Daisy’s killer, although in this book, DeMuth gives us a few more pieces of the puzzle. 

Emory Chance struggles with the guilt of losing her daughter. If she hadn’t been strung out on drugs, she would’ve been able to protect Daisy. She lives with all the regrets of denied hugs and neglect. She promises to flush the drugs, but her guilt and shame spiral her downward. Drugs are her only chance for relief.

Hixon is a man of prophecy. God told him he’d marry Emory. Though Emory holds him at a distance, he sees past her hardness to her hurt.

With clean writing, DeMuth puts the reader into the center of Emory’s remorse and pain but is able to write redemptively, offering hope to the worst of sinners (to quote Paul and presume Emory’s feelings). In her Southern fiction style, DeMuth shows grace to people grappling with glorifying God in painful circumstances.

An accomplished writer, Mary’s parenting books include Authentic
Parenting in a Postmodern Culture, Building the Christian Family You
Never Had
, and Ordinary Mom, Extraordinary God.  Her real-to-life
novels inspire people to turn trials into triumphs: Watching the Tree
Limbs
(2007 Christy Award finalist, ACFW Book of the Year 2nd Place)
and Wishing on Dandelions (2007 Retailer’s Choice Award finalist).

This post has been a part of a blog tour. You can read more reviews and interviews at the following blogs:

Admissions of a Suburban Philosopher
All are welcome here
A Musing Mom Speaks
A Sandy Path Book Reviews
A Writer’s Journey
Adventures of the Duncan Six
AP Free Writing 101
Arkansas Dreams
Aspire2 Blog
Awesome God…Ordinary Girl
Be Your Best Mom
Beams of Light Ministries
Bell Whistle Moon
Blog Tour Spot
Bluebonnet in the Snow
Book Nook Club
Caregiving and Beyond
Carla’s Writing Cafe
Carly Bird’s Home
Carma’s Window
Cheaper by the Half Dozen
Cindy’s Stamping and Reviews
Communicating the Vision
CommuniKate
Critty Joy
Declaring His Marvelous Work
Drive Home Productions
Edgewise
Elizabeth Bussey
Faith…Creativity…Life
Fiction for the Restless Reader
Fictionary
First Impressions
Five Bazillion and One
Fresh Brewed Writer
Gatorskunz and Mudcats
Heading Home
His Reading List
i don’t believe in grammar
J’s Spot
Joy in the Journey
Karen R. Evans
Kristin Early
L’Chaim
Latte with Me
Lit Fuse
Literary Fangirl Book Reviews
Luxury Reading
Merrie Destefano
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Musings by Lynn
Musings of Edwina
My Alabaster Box
My Life Message
Net’s Book Notes
Niki Nowell
One Desert Rose
Paper Bridges
Passionate for the Glory of God
Pollywog Creek
Ranunculus Turtle
Real Hurts, Real Hope
Rebecca Barlow Jordan
Refresh My Soul
Restore
Scraps and Snippets
Sheila Deeth
Sherri Woodbridge
Sky-High View
Snapshot’s Photoblog
Surviving the Chaos
The 160-acre Woods
The Gospel Writer
The Harrison Kaleidoscope
The Heart of Writing
The Stubborn Servant
The View from Here
This That and The Other
To Be Beautiful
Unreasonable Grace
Walking Daily
WhadUsay
Where Romance Meets Therapy
Word Vessel
Write 2 Ignite
Write on the Knows
Writer’s Wanderings
Writing to the heart of the matter

Tapestry: Living Christianly in a Post-Christian Culture

I posted at Tapestry the promised discussion from the panel last weekend at the Christian Book Expo, "Living Christianly in a Post-Christian Culture" with authors Donald Miller, Randy Frazee, Mary DeMuth, and Ruth Haley Barton and moderated by Andy Crouch.

Because of the broadness of the subject matter, I pulled out three points from the panel. A taste:

"Our Christianity is pagan and looks more like voodoo than it does the
Christianity of the Bible. Following American materialism, our
Christianity has become consumerism. Have an unhappy, uncontented life?
Consume some Jesus."

Read the rest here.Buddy Jesus bobblehead

Also, Mary DeMuth posted her beginning and closing statements from the session on her blog. I highly recommend reading at least her opener. I found it hard to restrain myself from a hearty "Amen" (or "So say we all," for fellow BSG fans–no, don’t discuss the finale here; I haven’t seen it yet).


Book Thoughts: Daisy Chain by Mary DeMuth

Daisy Chain: A Novel (Defiance Texas Trilogy)
by Mary DeMuth is Southern Fiction complete with a taste of Flannery O’Connor horror. Jed’s best friend, Daisy (and according to her, future wife), went missing.

And it’s his fault.

She’d begged him to walk her home. She told him he’d be sorry. But he was too concerned about what his father would do if he was late. She was right. Now Jed has to deal with the guilt.

As fourteen-year-old Jed searches for Daisy, he cracks open the secrets of his family and secrets of the town.

Jed grows up during that summer. In the beginning, he sounds more like a nine-year-old than a teenager (a fact I sometimes found annoying), but by the end, he found himself, if you will, and his teenaged voice. As he grows up, he has to decide if he will let anger overtake him (as it has his father, most notably, and his mother), or if he will choose forgiveness and peace.

DeMuth did an amazing job of portraying characters through the point of view of a young teenager. As the novel progresses, the reader suspects there’s more to the characters than what Jed sees (I’m impressed with Mary’s ability to hint at this while never leaping away from Jed’s POV). Then Jed himself sees bits and pieces about his parents, about Daisy’s mom, Emory, and about others.

Then there’s Sissy, Jed’s little sister. Though she doesn’t write poetry, she reminds me of the little sister in Peace Like a River by Leif Enger. She was my favorite character. The fact that she loves Anne of Green Gables doesn’t hurt that.

It’s a page-turner. I knew the ending and still couldn’t put the book down (much to the annoyance of my husband, poor man, who thinks bedtime is for sleeping). Mary knows how to develop and sustain suspense. The story has aspects of horror (although it’s certainly not a horror story), especially in Sissy’s mysterious encounter with evil ("If evil’s coming to get you, it’ll find you–even in your bedroom"). 

It’s the first of a trilogy, and the author does a good job of giving us closer while retaining enough tension and unanswered questions to make me tap my fingers in impatience for the next book. (I’ve been told if I guess, Mary will let me know if I’m on the right track.) The book pulls at the loose threads of secrets, but the unraveling only begins.

The story is couched from Jed’s perspective thirty years later, although this is underdeveloped: a few lines in the beginning, a paragraph or two in the end, and a mention once (maybe twice?) in the middle. This undercut its significance. In fact, I’m not sure I understand why Mary chose this technique.

Also, Jed’s metaphors can be a bit much (and every once in a while have to be explained to make sure we get it).

I highly recommend this book. Mary DeMuth is one of the better CBA authors. She has a flair of literary in her writing.

You can find more reviews on these sites:

5 Minutes for Books
A Peek at My Bookshelf
A Spacious Place
Actual Unretouched Photo
Along the Way
Amy Storms
Ashley Weis
Aspire2 Blog
Awesome God . . . Ordinary Girl
blah-blah-blog
Blame it on the Loud Mouth Gene
Blog Tour Spot
Bluebonnet in the Snow
Book Nook Club
BookingIt
Bookworm’s Nook
Bound to His Heart
Callapidder Days
Camy’s Loft
Canadian Prairie Writer
Carla’s Writing Cafe
CommuniKate
Cyndy Salzmann
Declaring His Marvelous Work
dreamers of the day
Edgewise
Faith Fuel
Faith of a Single Mom
Fictionary
Five Bazillion and One
Giving Up on Perfect
Heading Home
Healthy Spirituality
Home-Steeped Hope
i don’t believe in grammar
it wasn’t me

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Just Pure Lovely
J’s Spot
Kindred Heart Writers
Krellfish
Leap of Faith
Life is one daily adventure
Lift My Noise
Lighthouse Academy
Literary Discoveries
Literary Fangirl
L’Chaim
Margaret Daley
Mari’s Morning Room
My Life Message
Paper Bridges
Partners in Prayer for Our Prodigal
Pix-N-Pens
Positive Moms
Prayerfully Penned
Rachel Hauck
Refresh My Soul
Reviews by Donna
Sarah Winfrey
Scraps and Snippets
See Ya On the Net
Simplifying Motherhood
Sips ‘n Cups Cafe
Sky-High View
The Gospel Writer
The Journey of Writer Danica Favorite
The March to Freedom
The Serial Writings of Robin Shope
The View From Here
The Writing Road
Whosoever Will Outreach Ministry
Wild Words . . . Photos and Fine Art
Wisdom Walk
Word Vessel
Write by Faith



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Writing Resource–The Writing Spa

Mary DeMuth has a keen eye for making manuscripts better.

I can say this because she’s made mine better. I met Mary at the Rockwall Christian Writer’s Group a little over two years ago. In those meetings, Mary’s critiques got to the heart of what was good and what needed improvement. She gave advice I could apply not just to the five pages we looked at that month but my whole manuscript. And she was always encouraging about it. I never left feeling like a loser. Quite the opposite. I left knowing I had work to do, and I was inspired to do it.

I tell you all this because Mary started a writing critique/mentoring service called The Writing Spa. She graciously answered a few questions for me about it.

How did you get started on your writing journey?

I started right after I had my first child. I saw a clear need to write a newsletter for moms about managing their homes well with the intent on giving. I launched the Giving Home Journal in 1992. The profits from that newsletter financed my first computer. With three little kids, I spent the bulk of my time feeding and diapering and singing and storytelling. But when those kids napped or rested, I wrote. I did that for ten years, writing in obscurity. When my youngest went to preschool, I dusted off my dream to be published and pursued it wholeheartedly. Within a year, I’d finished my first novel, landed a weekly columnist job, attended a local writer’s group regularly, participated in my first major writing conference, and landed an agent! Crazy! Since then I’ve had five books published with four more coming in the next 18 months.

How did others influence and encourage you along the way?

My husband Patrick’s always been a great encouragement to me. He’s cheerleaded me from the beginning. My children have too. I also had the pleasure of meeting Sandra Glahn, one of the professors at the seminary my husband attended. She really steered, directed and encouraged me forward. Her influence inevitably led to the creation of The Writing Spa. My passion for mentoring writers was birthed from her unselfish shepherding of me.

Tell me about the genesis of The Writing Spa.

The past two years transitioning back to life in America (We’d been church planters in France has been financially difficult for us. I spent a lot of time marketing my books, writing and editing my first novel with Zondervan, and mentoring writers for free. One I lessened the strain of too much work was to start http://www.wannabepublished.blogspot.com where I mentored writers through daily little articles on the blog. But this summer, I realized I’d have to cut way back on my mentoring and perhaps find a paying job. I taught at the Greater Philadelphia Writers Conference in August and had several writers approach me, asking me to mentor, and saying things like, “Would you coach me? I will pay for it.” Then I realized God was morphing my passion to help writers with our need for me to make a more steady income. And voila! The Writing Spa was born.

What is your vision for The Writing Spa?

I long for it to be a virtual place where writers are challenged to grow deeply and widely in the craft, where they’ll better understand the rigors of the publishing journey, and come away with a better piece of writing than they had when they came through the doors. I pray folks will be encouraged, and, Lord willing, published.

Thanks for joining us, Mary!

So if you feel stuck, if you don’t understand why you continue getting rejections, or if your manuscript yawns at its own prose, I recommend heading over to The Writing Spa and see if Mary can help you.